The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.
“Another clone shoulf mean less work…right?”
That would be the logical assumption, yes. Definitely should mean less work. Absolutely.
“update on the snakes please! check the SealScape and biju please! how is mist doing?”
Snakes are coming up. We get a glimpse at the sealscape and some of the Biju in 137-A. We’ll be checking on mist for a bit, too, but don’t expect too much on that front. They’re not in a position to majorly affect the story at the moment.
“the great thing about this story is its summary doesn’t give away anything The Wolves were a great surprise first time reading”
I should probably change that considering how much has deviated from my first idea for the story but I really don’t think i could come up with anythign better.
“Great chapter but if you’re having trouble maybe you should take a break if you’re starting to get as forgetful as Naruto”
I’m afraid that’s just me. I’ll remember something inconsequential forever but anything with the faintest hint of importance? Nope, that shit’s gone immediately.
“hey can you please have mai and naruto be a couple”
It’s possible that something might happen to that affect but I make no promises. Relationships will develop and change as the story progresses and nothing is set in stone- beyond the ending, anyway.
“by the gods I love how you portray Shinobi insanity”
“Damn, maybe for the good of the village someone should’ve just stepped on your writing hand. “For the good of the village, we can’t have any civilians left, we gotta slaughter them all.”
Get f***, freak. And all you’re d***, f*** up fans. Go f*** yourself.”
My memory isn’t the best and I fully accept that fact but I have absolutely no idea what might have happened back in chapter nine that would elicit such a response. I know Naruto was brought in for questioning and the chapter ended with Tatsuki but I’m not seeing what that has to do with slaughtering all civilians. Perhaps you’re talking about the fact that the entire Uchiha clan was wiped out? That’s the only connection I can really see here but I know the actual massacre happened in an earlier chapter so it doesn’t make much sense to see this here.
Of course, there’s little point in writing this when you’re unlikely to see it but it amuses me so I suppose some good came from your “dead” account. I don’t know why you would put an apology in your profile saying someone else was using your account to spread insults when you’re clearly still at it. We can see when you updated your profile, you know. Strange that you would still be using it a month later.
And, because I’m petty, I will- naturally- have to point out that there is no “writing hand” when it comes to typing.