The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.
“Sooo… we get Gaara Isobu moments now? Yeah we should get Gaara Isobu moments now.”
-Axius W. Xanzux
I’ll see what I can do.
“Wonder if they’ll end up making sand people to fill the village?”
That’s not a bad idea, actually. I wonder if- Oh, no, that’s not a good train of thoughts to follow.
“The ending of the chapter was so adorable.”
Glad you liked it.
“Encroaching on a million words and Naruto is not even fourteen yet. This must be a record of some sort.”
….He might be fourteen by now, I took a while figuring out how long has passed but I can’t remember where I wrote that down. Probably in one of these commentaries.
“Great chapter nothing to add though I am curious, with Mai having the title of Amaterasu, would Au be insulted?”
He wouldn’t be too pleased, no, but not for the reasons you’re probably thinking. I’d really like to add more to this but this isn’t exactly the place to start spewing Aū lore…..I think.