The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.


“I’m just waiting for the next chapter. because I’ve REALLY been interested in his dual chakra networks”

Remember that, do you? It’s not next chapter but that is coming up soon, so stay tuned.


“God i love the Ninja in this. They are all uniquely unhinged, and it makes sense really, you don’t live there life style and maintain a healthy mindset.”

They’re pretty fun to write which means you liking them gives me an excuse to play with them more. Thanks.


“good chapter.

So yugao try to get naruto favors back, could be very difficult even impossible since killing his family is the worst thing you can do to him.”

Yes, it’s definitely going to be no walk in the park.

Fayth Mayonaka

“Thanks for the awesome birthday present of a new chapter of this story!”

Happy Birthday! You should have let me know sooner so I could have put something in a AN.


Daaamn Yugao is really miserable right now, she actually reminds me a lot of kushina right now, she will need to do a lot of stuff in favor of naruto if she wants to be forgiven, and I am not talking about just being his spy, she would need to also sabotage any and all plans against the wolves that she knows or even hears, maybe then will she regain his trust or he’ll even her chance to explain why she did it put of grief and didn’t really think it at all until it was already too late, so yeah now she is in the same boat as kushina Дand like kushina if she wants to be in his life again then they will have to offer everything they have and join his new family.

And it’s really funny to see what the big bad akatsuki guys are doing, one has already joined forces with naruto as his spy and the other two are on vacation with one of his girls their son and their family xD so yeah really amusing to say the least.”

She’s lost a lot recently and only has herself to blame for some of it. I suppose she is in quite a similar position as Kushina, though Kushina is slightly better off because Naruto simply doesn’t care about her or what she did anymore.

The wounds from his lost children are still quite fresh.

Akatsuki is great fun to write because they’re all considered to be dangerous, criminally insane, or both. When it’s my messed up Shinobi who have that opinion of them, well, I get to go all out. It’s brilliant.


“I’m curious, will you ever make Aū an, you know, God? A shrine for him would make sense. And when will Kushina, someone who is SO VITAL to the story that you have her name as a tag, actually have a scene with Naruto? But all that aside, good chapter”

He is a god, a very old god. A god so old he has been forgotten by the world and his following was wiped out long ago.

She was vital. Naruto would never have become Tsukuyomi without the mistakes she made. I tagged her because of the role she served in the beginning of the story and have thus far felt no need to remove it.


“Was Naruto actually making sound while going over the wall just so you could show us that scene with the anbu or has he been slacking/or is there some other factor that made this hard for him? earlier portrayals would suggest that scaling a wall with his chains without making a sound should be a peace of cake to him…

Overall a good chapter but there have been better ones (the leaving of wave seemed kinda lackluster, after the last few chapters I expected Hana to throw him some kind of party or at least make his people watch him leave and asuma is still operating on wrong/incomplete information, something I thought hiruzen or danzo would have addressed by now, I am indifferent/unconcerned with the yugao/kurenai talk but that’s just me not caring much about either of them…)

PS. (just realise that deidara captured the sanbi in canon, meaning that 2 of his targets (I write this under the assumption that pain gave specific objectives towards specific members) are part of the 10(13)tails of nope that he and sasori are currently avoiding… That makes me pity him somehow more than I do yugao…)

(i also think you addressed this before but can you remind me if pain will have a major problem with tsukuyomi calling himself a God? He did have a jashinist in akatsuki so maybe he is indifferent towards religion)”

He was going for speed, he only had a slight window to make it over. He also doesn’t have a way to muffle the noise. Normally he’d target something else but he had limited options in this case and had to settle for the metal guardrail.

Also, as he mentioned to Anko, he wasn’t that concerned with being caught, either. It simply would have been inconvenient.

Kisame mentions that they do have assigned Biju in one of the chapters, though I cant’ recall the number from the top of my head.

Only the Wolves and those who deal directly with- or against- them know of their views towards their leader, but I cant’ see Pein caring any less about the Wolves until he learns what Tsukuyomi has in his possession and even then the Biju he has would hold his attention much more firmly than the beliefs of a fanatical army.


“I think you need 10 years if you are planning to complete it”

Four years down, six to go.

The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.


“One question who knows that Naruto is Tsukuyomi?”

That is a….rather large list, actually. The Wolves, Kakashi, Anko, Orochimaru, Orochimaru’s servants, the Fire Daimyo, Tsunami, Mikoto, Kisame, the Suna Siblings, Danzo, Hiruzen, and probably more I’m forgetting.

I’m actually going to have to go back through the story to see if Shizune, Hanabi, or Kurenai are aware because I can’t recall off the top of my head.


“good chapter.
Me too, i don’t really understand why inari hates naruto and the wolves, after they turned nami into a florishing country where family can live and eat properly.”

Despite the good he’s done, Inari sees Naruto as just another Gato – A foreigner coming into his home and declaring himself the ruler. It doesn’t matter if things are good under his rule, Inari resents the fact that it’s not the people of Nami deciding their own future.


“This was nice all in all hope we get to see the conversation between Inari and Tsunami but, it’s not bad if we don’t since it’s somewhat predictable, so he is going back next chapter or the one after that? Can’t wait for the asuma confrontation/dismissal…

I do feel like there is more to the isobu thing than karuras mentioned though…”

I hadn’t planned on it, but I might end up putting that into one f the chapters. You know, if I manage to remember it.


“Heh narutos family is growing since now he officially has a new daughter who has him wrapped on her lil finger :3

And naruto shut Ingrid mouth up for good with his hard facts haha, that’s what I love about having information that others don’t since you can shut them up so beautifully, and he is still sleeping with his mother wich makes it even better xD oh and let’s not forget that haha is currently trying to act as a matchmaker for naruto and her own mother haha, that is certainly gonna be very interesting that’s for sure.”

Yes, yes she does.

Inari had most of the information, he just needed someone to slap him in the face with it.

I don’t suppose this will be a very long post considering it’s pretty much just a link I need to put here, but We’ll see if we can stretch it out a bit so it’s not too sad.

First, the important bit. Click [Here] for the link into the server.

And, well, that’s really all you need.

But before you leave, some tips!

Read the Community Guidelines, those are the current rules. Things may need to be changed depending on how this goes but when they do change it will be on that page.

Mute the channels under the Tatsumaki category. Tatsumaki is one of the bots on the server and those channels used to have a lot of activity as people made use of it. Not sure if they still do, it’s been muted for like two months on my end.

The “Imperial Wolves” are our Admins, Mods, whatever you like to call them. A basic overview of how they’ll handle those who violate our guidelines can be found in the same channel, though the more detailed version is in their private channel.

Other than that, well, just know that the channels under the Personal Domains category can get a bit weird. Enter at your own risk.

That should do it for tips and now we have a proper looking post.

Until I next have your attention,