Commentaries – Sealkeeper 106

The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.

TheGreatBubbaJ

A constantly growing family.

Indeed.

WindyCitySlayer1

Will the lemon be available for fanfiction after two weeks or is it only a patron exclusive?
Can’t wait for more
Please continue
Awesome chapter

To avoid going against FanFiction.net’s terms of service, the lemon will not be posted to their website.

Iamfreakingout

‘really really loving this. When will Asuma find out about Naryuto already. I want it to be like old man Sarutobi going like oh yeah did I forget to tell you that Tsukuyomi is actually Naruto. or something like that.’

I’ve recently come up with how he’ll find out. Should be fun.

Droze

‘Why not call the discord ‘The House of Wolves?’ Makes the most sense to me… The chapter’s f*** great, by the way’

That’s very, very tempting but I think I’d like to go for a shorter name.

daniel2610994

‘Loool kakashis is way ahead of everyone when it comes to plans for strenghtening naruto and starting a civil war in their own home just so naruto can rule it over sounds like a really good idea xD specially if then they make Anuma take care of it as revenge haha, and Hana is definitely on to something since her mother was already more than willing to sleep with Mai with she did, so if she wants to have the chance again she is either gonna have to compete with naruto over it or just do as they say: if you can’t beat them join them hehehe and I wholeheartedly prove of that since I love harems xD and damn tsunami is proving to be really thirsty for naruto, so he will have to take care of her, thankfully he now has 3 bijuu and his uzumaki stamina to carry him on since his number of girls will just keep growing more and more.


And Merry Christmas man thanks for the chapter.’

That’s Kakashi for you.

I can neither confirm nor deny any of the rest of your conjecture.

And a merry Christmas to you as well.

Hmason

‘always nice to see Naruto adding people to his family LOVE Isobu as a kid calling Naruto Daddy and that cuddle scene was just beautiful’

She makes a very good child, I think.

CamTheThief

‘Kakashi absolutely made this chapter. He’s as insane as they come and my god do I love it. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again – your decision to embrace the “powerful ninja are crazy” aspect of Naruto and run with it has truly made your fic.’

Yeah, he’s great. Hands down one of the best to write.

It works too well to not be accurate, I think.

Wicked.A

‘So instead of using a henge to simulate clothes he does what is called a pro gamer move and strolls around in the nude? Holes in his seal sound like something terrible that he should address immediately…


Kakashi is such a troll and I love it…


Naruto x sealkeeper mito ot wife of the 1. Hokage mito?


And could we pls get a more detailed description of SMOL isobu? Mito and karura are easy since we have a template but we don’t have much on isobu…’

Hell yeah he does, he’s the fuckin’ Daimyo. If he want’s to walk around his palace in the buff he damn well will.

Wife of the first- cannon Mito…..sorta. It’s slightly modified cannon not connected to Sealkeeper in anyway other than the rather popular pairing.

I believe there’s one in the next chapter but I know I’ve added a few to the 108/109 mess. There should be at least one in 108 after I figure out which scenes are going where.

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