The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.
“I’m surprised people haven’t claimed him to be a fertility God, or God of pleasure lol.
tsukiyomi God of Moon and the kinkyness.”
Don’t give Anko ideas, please.
“great chapter but could you atleast add the English translation for the names because i have no idea what the hell they were talking about taking over”
While I did that the first time, I forgot to add them to this chapter. I’ll try to remember next time.
“why don’t you use Uzushio”
There are a few reasons. Naruto doesn’t claim his Uzumaki ancestry anymore, it’s rather cliched, and- most importantly- it’s not marked on my maps so I can only guess which island it actually is.
“With as many women as Naruto does the deed with his doctors should check for certain illnesses…
This chapter seems more… Juicy than usual… “GASP!Will we finally get a lemon?
I would be so pissed if Narutos Chakra was even further damaged glad this is not the case…
Hope that yu kuni takeover won’t piss off the fire daimyo…
I assume next chapter we will see SMOL isobu? (I wonder if she has a shell on her back like bowsette…or an eyepatch since the sanbi seemed to have only one eye)”
…..That’s a fair point actually, he probably should get himself checked out.
No, there will not be a lemon. Not as part of a post on Fanfiction.net, anyway. I might write one on the side at some point.
That would be telling.
I do believe she’s in the next one, yes. As for her appearance, well, you’ll have to wait and see.
“Is he gonna accidentally recreate Kaguya? Kinda what I’m thinking”
You know, that’s kind of tempting. That wasn’t the intention but I’ll hold onto that idea. Thanks mate.
“Another fun chapter as always. I quite liked the geopolitical discussion that cropped up when the Wolves started talking business. Gives your world a sense of weight beyond the rather simple view offered by Naruto canon.
Naruto and the many, many women in his life. Tsunami taking her shot was amusing as hell (especially with the constant references to Kakashi from both her and Naruto’s perspectives.) I do have to ask though… how fucking short is he? I can’t recall his age exactly, but barely reaching Tsunami’s chest when he’s a teen makes him WAAAAY below average. At age 14-15 you’d expect him to be around 64 inches or so, which is also the average height for a woman (using US averages here, but ratios are similar regardless of where). So if he “at least” reaches her bust he’s absolutely tiny (even if she’s just tall, he’s still really short.) I admit the surprisingly prevalent short-protagonist trope hasn’t amused me outside of FMA so I really hope you allow him to hit the age-befitting growth spurt soon. Until that happens my mental picture of him is absolutely mangled.”
I do love a bit of world building. Glad you enjoyed it.
I sent you a PM about this, but I’ll leave a smaller version here for the sake of the commentary . He’s not small but with the way he’s been described he’s not exactly tall either. I’ll work on fixing that.
“Heh tsunami seduced her boss, she definitely is one naughty milf hehe, oh I am sure she will fail to resist doing it again, after all she has already tasted what naruto has to offer and oh boy she definitely liked it by the looks of it so of course she will “attend” to him over and over and over again even when he is with Anko to make a nice threesome, and to think that was just the beginning of the chapter xD anyway it’s good that naruto is finally healed and he can use his chakra again once he rests for a week, or at least that’s what I understood wich I hope I am right because it will make naruto unstoppable hehe, because this is where things will get rough for him and his wolves by destroying one of the four remaining most powerful countries even if it is temporary, so opposition will be hard at least for a while and naruto knows it wich is why he is planning ahead, and so of course he is gonna take over another country xD man he seriously is gonna rule the world one day, I can’t wait until he goes to kumo to seduce Yugito Samui karui or Mabui or preferable the four :3 after all I don’t want Yugito and fu to die to akatsuki so of course he has to save them hehe, after all seducing fu and making her leave the village that hates her will be easy but that is still way into the future if at all depending on what you wanna do.
But first they need more wolves to have complete control of their next new country wich soon will be theirs, oh and naruto has to go meet his new bijuu too after his play date with Anko. “
I don’t think thins are going to go that far- for any of it- but I suppose we’ll just have to see how things end up going.
General Response and Closing
There wasn’t a lot of feedback this week, which was odd, but it did let me get through this pretty quickly which is good because I spent way too much time doing Server Maintenance for the Discord earlier.
I don’t really have anything else to say here so I’ll see you all in a week for the next update.
Until I next have your attention,