The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.

DPSS

“Naruto really needs to build his chakra capacity and tolerance for Bijuu Chakra back up. Would bonding back with Mito help any?”

Having her back wouldn’t change anything there, I’m afraid. Had she stayed he would have been much better off but the results of her departure are more or less permanent.

Are there ways to get around those limitations? That would be telling.

mistermen

“I really wanna see mikoto kisame fight“

Why would Kisame fight his adorable Kohai? Tobi is a good girl.

Wicked.A

“Narutos talent for creating cults is astounding…
Summoning Manda I’d unexpected but may privet beneficial (if Manda doesn’t f#ck up and attacks him first) I am curious though can Naruto with karuras help use a bijuu bomb or are they not linked the way canon Naruto is with kurama (or is his Chakra to damaged to help in creating a tailed beast bomb?)
Can’t wait for samehada to betray kisame for Naruto maybe he can feed it moryos tooth to make it evolve from a water type into a water dark type(pokemon reference)“

If they really wanted too it would certainly be possible. The strain of channeling so much Chakra would apply severe limitations to its use, however, and using just a single Bijudama could very well leave him incapable of fighting in his current state.

Feeding a sword to a sword? I’m no expert and I’ve never been on TV but I’m pretty sure that’s not how it works.

Arraia

“Perfect and update soon please
Where is mito ?“

I’ve answered this several times now but because people keep asking;

Chapter 104. She’s in chapter 104.

Noahendless

“Great chapter as usual, you’re probably the best writer that i follow. But I have a quick question, you’ve gone over this a little bit before in your blog posts, but I’m curious about what drives you. You clearly enjoy writing, and you’re clearly very good at it, so my question is what drives you beyond that?“

Thank you, I appreciate the flattery. I would say that writing is the byproduct, what I’m really doing is exploring ideas. It doesn’t matter what I’m doing, there’s always a way that something I see or an action I take could somehow become an element to a story, or, more accurately, there’s always a curiosity about what would happen if those elements were introduced into an existing story.

Writing allows me to organize and expand on those thoughts which keeps them from driving me crazy. Well, more crazy. Most ideas are quickly replaced by others- or eventually merged with their fellows to create a much better idea- but the more persistent ones have to be written down or I’l be constantly worried I’m going to loose them.

If I could somehow manage to keep track of my notes it might be far more efficient, but clearing them from my head is usually a good enough result for me.

There’s also the fact that if I wasn’t writing I wouldn’t really be sure what to do with myself. I’ve been writing for so long now that I can’t imagine not sitting down to type something up.

Well, that’s not completely true. If I wasn’t writing I would just play videogames and as anyone who’s ever stopped by the stream or watched one of the videos I have posted to Youtube I’m not very good at them. Writing is much more my forte, evidently.

General Response and Closing

There weren’t a lot of responses including questions or comments for me to address today, so this commentary is rather short. On the plus side, all of your responses were positive which pleases me greatly.

Until I next have your attention,

-Eyazahrid