Commentaries – Sealkeeper Chapter 95

Contrast – Posted 2019.08.26

The following are the recorded responses of Eyazahrid to the feedback he received on the above listed chapter and the story in general for the week following. This document is to serve as a replacement to the traditional Author’s Note at the beginning and ending of chapters and will be kept separate from both the above listed chapter and any future chapters unless deemed sufficiently important.

The Garage

Quantum qwazi has mentioned my “Angsty garage” in their recent review, which I find quite concerning. Sure, it can be a bit melodramatic but as the house isn’t that old I’m sure it will grow out of it soon.

Pretty sure they meant Angsty Garbage, but the idea of my garage being angsty is much more amusing.

They only made it to chapter 14, too. I can only imagine what they would have thought of the rest of the story. Who knows, maybe they would have correctly identified the feelings of the rest of my house.


Sane is subjective, though I really wouldn’t consider Naruto’s clone acting as he normally does entirely stable.

Yes, even as I write some of the characters I normally hate in cannon and fanfiction I’ve found myself liking them. It’s a very strange feeling.

Dining Rooms

I’m very relieved to hear that it amused you, YuukiAsuna-Chan. I was having second thoughts about it when I was writing it. I’m glad to see my sense of humor isn’t too poor.

Daddy Danzo

TheGreatBubbaJ, I’m not sure I appreciate you using those words together like that. I’ve done some weird shit in my story with a grin on my face but those two words just feel wrong.


While I appreciate the concern and advice, this chapter was no more rushed than any other and certainly less rushed than tomorrow’s.

I do go over each chapter before posting- because I learned the hard way not to correct things while writing or it will never get done- but I don’t always catch everything. I’m heavily spellcheck reliant.

I’m not sure what grammar issues you’re noticing but if you could point them out next time it would go much farther in improving my work.

General Response and Closing

There was a lot of positive responses to the last chapter which I really appreciate. Hearing that you enjoy my work makes it much easier for me to write and is probably one of the only reasons I’ve managed to continue writing this story at all.

If I missed a review you left and you had really been looking forward to a response please reach out to me. It may sometimes take a bit to respond but I do my best to reply to PMs and Emails in a timely manner. You can also join me during my next stream- which is looking like 2019.09.12- to ask any questions you have live.

Until I next have your attention,


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